User blog comment:Alex Martin Rider/Is there anyone out there?/@comment-1970687-20100730221930

just a little feedback. i know that its a really difficult task but i think that the chapters should be longer to hold the readers interest. what i mean is, in a book, the chapters are several pages long. of course you dont have to make it that long, although maybe 5 paragraphs would really add to the story. i like the way the story is going so far! keep at it! :-)