User blog comment:Juan Jose Rodriguez/Help/@comment-1079585-20100329235158

You may want to read this. It doesn't have all of the answers for you, but hopefully it will be at least a little helpful.

And I am about as close to a professional proofreader/editor as anyone you'll ever meet, so I would be glad to read over your story for you. First I would read it just to read it, then I would go through slowly and fix anything that might need fixing.