Forum:Kid SEAL 2 Trailer

I have decided to write a short 2 paragraphs from my next idea, Kid SEAL 2. This will be like a trailer for the full thing, like that Dark of the Moon trailer that I posted a few days ago. The short is below.

Kid SEAL 2
Dylon Harris's POV

I wandered the streets. Lost. Nowhere to go, nowhere to hide, nowhere to stay. My entire team had been wiped out by someone, and two of them were kidnapped. Now it was just like a year and a half ago. Except, this was a ghost town. No one was here. This meant I didn't need my USP that I took before I left. However, it could come in useful. Though I doubt that would happen...

I quickly turned right. I swore I saw a shadow move in the building's second story window. "Who are you?" I yelled as I drew my USP. I heard footsteps behind me. "Show yourself!" I shouted. I heard a gun cock. "Get away from me!" I yelled. I started running. Someone was trying to kill me. I quickly rounded a corner at an intersection, the ran into an alley. I knew that I had lost them.

A big, buff hand grabbed my shoulder and pulled me back. "Вы поедете с нами." the person said.

End of trailer

What do you guys think?