User blog comment:AdvancedRookie/A battle/@comment-1484645-20100225005643

It has to make sense and be somewhat realistic. That rule was established quite early on. No offense to you, but I'm just trying to maintain the integrity of the story, which your ideas fail to do. Seriously, I'm not trying to be a dick. Kinda sounds like it though. Sorry.

So, continuing from Juan...no, actually I'll do my best with what Shepherd's ghost gave me. But please, keep it realistic from now on.

Griever shoots "George" in the face with his M9A1. "Crazy bastard. Obviously just some terrorist on LSD." Then a second sniper, who was alerted by the first, fires a shot. Palmer move into the base to eliminate the sniper. Cain says, "No! If you guys go in there you'll never make it out in time!" Palmer turns around and says "Cain. I'm frickin' Spencer Palmer.  Savvy?" Griever stands up and says "I'm going with you Spencer." Palmer replies "Cool. Lets finish this thing, I'm freaking tired." They reach the sniper's position and eliminate him. "How much time we got left?" asks Griever. "One minute!" replies Palmer. "There's no way we're going to get out in time!" says Griever. "I beg to differ," replies Palmer, indicating a running Little Bird chopper nearby. "You can fly that thing?" Palmer asks Griever. "Hell yeah," replies Griever. They run to the Little Bird, shoot the pilot, and evac from the base just as the MSG activates. "I'm getting pretty god damn sick of these fucking close calls!" yells Palmer. All the enemies in the base are pulled to the ground, receiving life-ending concussions. Palmer and Griever regroup with the rest of the team.

"That was one hell of a day. Let's get outta here," says Williams, as friendly helos arrive to evacuate them.