User blog:Conqueror of all Zombies/Running for Student Counsel VP

I need some help. This is a speech my dad wrote for me:

I'm CENSORED and I'm running for your Vice President. Many of you may have seen me on the football field or even on lacrosse field, I'm just like any one of you. One of the most important issue is life, just being a part of it is hard enough. Knowing where to go, what to doesn't isn't always easy. I have said to you all before that I'm a very approachable person, I'm here to work for you, it's your student council. We all have to remember that a leader is not one who controls followers, but someone who is of the people. Sometimes people want a leader that involves them in decisions and ideas. I want you all to be a big part of all ideas that we may have come up. And in all my times running I have never made a promise that I could do. We don’t know what is in front of us ,but if you give me the opportunity to be your Vice president I will help you all in any way I can, we all have to remember that if life troughs you lemons you make lemonade. Again thank you, and don’t for get to vote for me for Vice President.

This is the one I'm writing (unfinished):

I'm CENSORED and I'm running for your Vice President. In all my times running I have never made a promise that I couldn't keep. We all are going into high school, and I don't think anyone running knows what we can or can't do. But I will do my best to do whatever I can. Don’t forget to vote for me for Vice President.

I need some help on finishing mine. Oh, did I mention that the speeches are going to be given tomarrow? They just told us that on Monday. I've been busy, so I haven't been able to get any of it done, untill now.