User talk:Juan Jose Rodriguez

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Archive
I archived your talk page. It was getting too big. Darkman 4 06:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Story
Before I start proofing it, I just need to know what kind of narration you're going for and if you want me to change anything for stylistic purposes in addition to syntax. Just an example of what I mean... (I will not edit it here, just put my opinions in parentheses within the excerpt)

In 2011, with no other career choices open, I enlisted in the Armed Forces of Mexico. My life… wasn’t pretty (I would go with "My life wasn't what you would call pretty," as pauses like that should usually be reserved for dialogue). Growing up in poverty in Torréon took a lot out of me as a child, but I made it through. I lost my girl at the age of 14 (What? You were just talking about childhood, then suddenly you lost your daughter. Also, using the word "girl" there is pretty confusing; I'm not even 100% sure that you are talking about a daughter), but I recovered (two "comma but" clauses right next to each other, I would reword). I made it through the bad, and I was ready for the worst.

So if you want me to go to town on this thing, I will, but if you want me to just tidy up, I'll do that instead. Imrlybord7 20:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Vandal
This page needs deleating T C   E   B 22:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

BLOG
I had i blog called W.U.C, I belive Bord deleated it, But I do not know why, can you put it back. T C   E   B 21:02, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't threaten him.
I merely said, that it IS possible for his power to be taken away if he uses it irresponsibly.

 Your nuke is ready, turn the key! 02:52, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I know this is random, but....
Do you play on 360 or PS3?  Codfan

Damn. It's fine. Anyways, how's your fan fic for MW2 coming along?

Haha. Can I read it? Lol. But I'm serious, if there's some way I can read it, then I will and give you my opinions on it.

You can send it to my email right? My wikia email is andrewnaitor@gmail.com. I'll try to see if there's anything confusing with the plot or maybe some things that should be fixed, but for the most part, I'm gonna try to enjoy it instead. Can you send it as a Microsoft word file if you can? Thanks. My email again is andrewnaitor@gmail.com

If you send it, tell me, I don't usually check my email.

Thanx man. I'll read it and give you my opinion tomorrow.

Just so you know, the M4 and the M4A1 are different. The M4 is 3-round burst and no automatic and M4A1 has automatic capability. I think you might wanna change that, unless you actually intended to have the 3-round burst M4. Codfan 05:31, April 8, 2010 (UTC)Codfan

I'm sorry to break it to you, but there are some people like me (sorry to say) that just have to have the perfect thing in everything. Lol. Most of the media and people think all M4's are the same, you don't have to change it.

I'm sorry if I saound bitchy, but it would be near-impossible to carry an Intervention (weapon) around an oilrig, albeit, with about 4 magazines, could you change to something more practical like your "Maria" with an attached Thermal Sight? (this isn't the campaign itself anyways so it opens up for creativity.)

In the part where you go on Operation Snowstorm, it is near-impossible to use an M82 like that, it's over 4 feet long and weighs near 40 pounds. Use an M14 for practicality or a WA2000. Sorry, I'm just saying some things you could change for a little more realism, I never said Modern Warfare 2 was realistic.

Ghost wasn't burned to death, only Roach was. Ghost may have survived the betrayal while it's absolute that Roach died. Again, Ghost wasn't burned to death. Codfan 06:59, April 8, 2010 (UTC)Codfan

Dude, I have news that... your story was the most fuckin epic story ever. It was great except for a few realism quirks (I don't think it's possible to throw an M82 to a guy and expect him to catch it), but nevertheless, that was epic dude. Post it on the wiki as soon as Griever and Lrmrlybord7 are done proofreading it and take my advice too (although some may seem like BS.) Codfan 07:29, April 8, 2010 (UTC)Codfan


 * Actually if Roach died, Ghost died, they both took shots to the chest and would have bled out, the incineration was removal of evidence, and sounds like an interesting story, could you send it to me? Thanks.  Darthkenobi0 Talk 07:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Why gay marriage is wrong
1. Gay porn is not very pleasing.

2. The Bible says gay marriage is wrong.

XxOwnageXx

My GOD!
I just had it in my head! I just know somewhere it's in there. Anyway if you don't hate my guts, add SpeckledEage on LIVE, but you don't have to. Type in gay guys in Bible and it should pop up. Don't talk to Bord though, he's an athiest.

Che
You do know he is an enemy of the United States and was a Communist. After all it was the B.S.S. and the C.I.A. that executed him. Playing as an enemy of the United States without some plot twist wouldn't make much sense and would get more controversy then Residetn Evil 5.

The story
Dude, the realism issues, don't change it if that's what you intended, it does seem more dramatic that way. Great story. I found one error with grammar during the Estate assault though. But that's only onr, Griever and Bord are sure to find that out. Don't change anything, don't, if you do I'll get mad at you. Lol. I'm kidding. But don't change anything. Codfan 19:44, April 8, 2010 (UTC)Codfan

Hitler was a good man, Stalin was a good man (at first impression)
At first they were all good leaders at first, then did some bad things, but what they did lead to several things going wrong. Starting the Castro thingy in Cuba makes him of my worst enemies. One man's trash is another man's treasure I guess.

He supported Castro
Castro supported nuking America. Also you can speak Spanish? Cool. I can read Russian, but I can't speak it though.


 * The nukes were given to Cuba as a means of threatening America, regardless of whether or not they actually intended to use them. That's still a no-go in my books. NinjaPro1.png Capt. Bord T C   E 20:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I never said that I believe that Che supported nuking the U.S. (because I don't), but there is no doubt in my mind that the nukes were put there to threaten, not attack, but threaten the U.S. That's what the Cold War was all about, using nukes to scare the shit out of the cappies/commies, depending on which side. NinjaPro1.png Capt. Bord T C   E 20:10, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Fan Fic
No he didn't I got off right about when he posted that and didn't really notice. My email bflet12@yahoo.com is at the top of my page.  Darthkenobi0 Talk 20:29, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I don't get a copy? /leftout -- EightOhEight.png T    C     E  22:21, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * ehwassupyo@yahoo.com, to0.f4r.0ut@hotmail.com, your choice. -- EightOhEight.png T    C     E  23:22, April 8, 2010 (UTC)