User blog comment:Alex Martin Rider/Is there anyone out there?/@comment-1967485-20100729184453

Uhh...Well...Your story...has...become..less cool. Short chapter which most of the time tell a length about 10-20 minutes and...You don't post on a let's say 3 day basis. So I guess it the time length and the story that lost my attention. And How about you lower down the charachters you use for each chapter. Not everyone has to be on this chapter and then again on this chapter. You can use that charachter and then use him later in 3 chapters. I had to scan like 50 times to find John "BravoAlphaSix" Mishnick in CHapter 7. By best regards, BA6