Talk:Pyrrhic Victory

Summary
Grounds for removal of my proposed plot section for this article: "that seems more like a summary not the whole plot of the mission imo". I'm afraid I don't understand this logic. When I wrote the new plot section, I corrected several grammatical errors, made what I deemed important clarifications, and merely patchworked the old writing for the necessary improvements. In most instances I quite literally took the old facts and just gave it a more stylish finish. As a lurker for many weeks prior, I consistently found the original revision unclear and - if I may add - most ungratifying to read.

Thanks, --Emperor of Trebizond (talk) 21:13, November 21, 2013 (UTC)