Okay, many things are bugging me at this point, and before things get completely out of control, we need to take a little break and discuss some things.
- Time: I don't think any of us have any agreement with what time it is supposed to be. The prologue took place sometime around six o'clock in the morning, Eugene, Michael and Brandon go to the armory for the first time by seven in the morning at the latest, Doherty meets up with them shortly after and then there's a timeskip of several hours. It was my impression that when the other group entered the Reichstag it was the evening and the Sun was somewhere between just starting to set (~5:30 P.M.) and almost fully set (~8:30 P.M.), then it's suddenly midnight.
- Usage of other user's characters: People have used, for example, my Eugene Vicks without asking me whatsoever, and there's a rule that says that users should consult others before using their characters. It just happens that I'm fine with almost everything other posters have depicted him doing, but something like this really needs to be followed.
- The fact that some people are posting in purely quotation format. Come on, this is a huge no-no for written English. I, myself, have a really hard time telling what is going on if it's all quotes.
- Plot continuity: So, four guys were in the Reichstag and other group of half-a-dozen others decided to go search the building for the first group they knew were in there. Eugene came up with the idea of trying to leave town for an American base and ended the chapter with a 'Who's with me?', but suddenly Allen and Cooper go outside and seemingly ditch the others. If there is no cohesion between posters, roleplays suck horribly.
- God-modding: Everyone wanting their character to be really cool and special also makes the story corny. Scoring one-hundred confirmed kills is the limit of it, but being able to carry an MG42 around and have any thought of being able to fire accurately without a tripod or bipod or carrying an FG42, a pistol, and a flamethrower with associated tank would bog anyone down so much they would have no combat effectiveness.
I agree. Sorry about that. I got carried away. I suggest we delete all the parts where it starts to get corny and the rest. I'll edit Herzog and Cole's arsenal. As for using Herzog,
I give you permission to use him in your entries, but you cannot kill, wound, abuse him without asking me first.
As for Cole, absolutely NO ONE can touch him as I mentioned before.
Shadowwnet123 00:59, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Oh crap, I just now saw that before I put up my new entry. In any case, something I want to address:
- Wilding: What the %*& happened? One minute he's with one character, another he's speaking English and snickering when another mentions his superiors. I recall RPing him knowing next to no English other than "Don't shoot". Maybe we should roll the actualy storyline back to entry 10 or so.
- Sometimes the character speaks a language that they don't speak I.E. Russians in The Hunt For Red October speak English so you can Understand!! Because subtitles don't work on books! Squelliot
Also, should we make a map of the area so there's a reference? I know that I can't figure out where the hell anyone else is. Cpl. Wilding 01:25, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Resnov also put like electric doors too. I thought the rules were that none of the fictional weapons and equipment existed? He made a very close call of mentioning the Pack-a-Punch machine
I'm not blaming anyone, but I think people get a little carried away when they write their entries; I know I did.
I sugges the map of the area is the map from "Heart of the Reich" and "Downfall"
If we're gonna be in the Reichstag, Downfall's map is much appropraite. If we're also going to mention outside the Reichstag, there's no better map than Heart of the Reich. If we're going to mention Berlin, Eviction would be nice, too. Shadowwnet123 01:32, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
This may not be the best course of action, but here is what I believe should address these problems:
1. For the time, someone should at least create a timeline for what happened. They'll present it on this talk page, and we'll see if it is fine, but if it isn't, we should make changes upon it until we agree on something.
2. For the bios at the top of the pages, we should include an extra part dictating whether or not such character can be use by others. This way, newcomers will see if they can use other characters without the user's consent.
3. For grammar, every three days a group of people should come by and correct all of the mistakes with the paragraphs.
4. For plot continuity, some chapters should be deleted while for the others another chapter could be included for an explanation. Others can be changed, however.
5. And please, people, don't make your people unreasonably strong. Make them more normal so that we don't get the impression that they are invincible.
6. For location, we should either draw out a map or use one of the multiplayer maps for reference, which I believe is much easier to understand.
Hope this helps.
Random Man 0213 18:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Just a few ideas about the post above.
First the timeline is a good idea.
second, everyone who posts their own character info should be required to post their usage requirements. More importantly, the fact that some writers restrict the usage of their characters completelycreates plot holes because the character cant be included.
About the plot continuity thing, we should delete the ones that are like one character is with these three people and then in the next chapter they are with completely different people on the other side of the same general area. For the ones that are just in a different setting just use a transitional word, like meanwhile.
I agree with the 3 day grammar check but we would either need to appoint a dedicated person who won't shirk the responsibility or have a roster for it.
The multiplayer map refrence is a good idea in and of itself but would only allow a small field of range for an entire city.
Again just a few thoughts.
Rambo362 19:42, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
My Bad >.< Edit
Sorry for doing that! But people, you are free to use my characters with out my consent, but you'll have to consult me if you're gonna kill of my characters, and I agree, roll the plot back to chapter 11, before things got out of hand.
Braden 0.0 01:54, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Same Here you can use my character without my consent also, but if you wanna kill him off, ask me. Toilet Bowl Soldier 11:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC+8)
I think we should restart the entire thing, new prologue, new characters,
Let's read the previous posts and be smart
And we should also date our posts: date and time and location
Shadowwnet123 04:11, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Personally, I think we should go back and start from chapter twenty-four. Up until then, things made sense. One group went to find another group and they were discussing trying to skip town for help from an American base, but Wilding got lost. After chapter twenty-four, two guys went out into the zombie-infested night for some odd reason; people started screaming about zombies; Erika started hitting headshots on zombies, even though it was a machinepistol and she had no training with it (absolutely rediculous); the group apparently went through some sort of tunnel and wound up at the Pankow Asylum (mind you, that's in a different city and they had no problem getting there?); they stole a truck and they went right back to where they started; no one even answered Eugene's question about going for the base; and no one noticed the German chap went missing and was shouting for help.
How many people are supposedly in this group at this point? There's Michael, Brandon, Cooper, Erika, Vasily, Evans, Eugene, Adam (has anyone even mentioned him since he appeared?), Allan, Wilding and Stanton, if I remember them all correctly. That's eleven people, and more just keep popping up. There's also Cole, Herzog, Ford, North, Butte, and Michael Kuhn who I was planning on adding, but at this point I feel like just leaving him out of this.
I really don't want to have to make such a move, but as the closest person to a gamemaster, I really think we should go back and get rid of everything after Eugene suggests the run out of town and Wilding gets lost. I mean, really, during a zombie apocalypse everyone wants to go to a pub and get some drinks? They don't have time for that. Sgt. ChiafriendRifleman 04:47, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Hey guys. Im sorry, but im a little confuzzed (Its a word) on how exactly, and what exactly, I do here. 7th Body 05:12, March 21, 2010 (UTC)7th Body
Hiya guys. I just want to explain what I want my character(s) to do. I want Hastings to hook up with John(the scientist) and explore for a little while. Afterwards, I would really like it if someone elses characters meet up with them, (not the main group, please.) I want to build my characters "bios" alongside a braver character. Hastings is a pilot who fears of zombies alot and John has no training in firearms whatsoever. I dont want them to die off early, and the story would be lame if there is no realistic zombie killing. I will put a lot of cliffhanger chapter endings until someone attaches a story. Please do it soon for the sake of the RP
First of all please sign your posts. Second, you can join my character (Robert Micheals) and Braden 0.0's characters (Allen and Stanton.) We're currently at the crashed helicopter site with an KO'ed Sgt. Falcon, surrounded by zombies. Can your characters, by any chance, have a medical background?
Rambo362 20:28, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
Whats up guys, I was thinking about joining this RP wiki, but it seems that you have quite a few things happening. Is this a bad time?
Sort of. We have to address a couple of problems but hopefull it will all be straightened out soon. Feel fee to join, but please do it after these problems have been corrected.
By the way, please sign your posts. :)
Random Man 0213 19:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Yea, sorry haha. KillerKing17 SoL* 02:49, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Can Anyone Just sign in and Write? Squelliot
yes Rambo362 00:56, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
so, this roleplay has become a little bit messy. Sorry for the 100 comfirmed killcount and the elctrical doors (Its the asylum part). I actually redering to Verruckt. Feel free to use my character. Youu may injure him, make him drunk, but if you want to kill him, please tell me. Sgt. Resnov Comrades! 20:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC+7)
so, this roleplay has become a little bit messy. Sorry for the 100 comfirmed killcount and the elctrical doors (Its the asylum part). I actually refering to Verruckt. Feel free to use my character. Youu may injure him, make him drunk, but if you want to kill him, please tell me. Sgt. Resnov Comrades! 20:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC+7)
Is this a bad time to point out that from a purely historical perspective, Hastings' back-story does not make sense? (The Battle of Britain finished in September 1940, the SAS was formed in July 1941)15:31, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
sorry, thank you sooo much. I wasn't really thinking about the whole SAS part, I just needed an excuse to give that Hastings could effectively use a gun. Most people wouldn't expect a pilot to use a rifle. Ill think of something. Omega8o8 17:01, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
hey guys i want my 2 characters Eddy and Daniel to meet up with Cole, Herzog, Ford, North, Butte, and Michael Kuhn. Because i think the group at the reichstag is HUGE.CODWAW AND MW2 FTW! 00:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)Sgt.Cpmaster22
Right now, we need t ofocus on ONE thing: What do we do? Do we reset the entire RP leaving only our modified characters or do we simply set time back to before some of the later RPers came? That's what we need to ask ourselves now and we'll work out the map and all that later. Cpl. Wilding 17:04, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Im ok with completely deleting my hard work to make it fit in with everyone else. I wanted to start up a second group of survivors, but apparently Im just "causing problems" Omega8o8 17:11, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
- I'm not saying you're causing problem (far from it, in fact) what I am saying is should we delete EVERYBODY's hard work or should we simply set the clock back? Cpl. Wilding 17:33, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I understand. My story can fit in as long as there is a storm, which was evident in the two chapters before it. I dont think that the time should be placed at night, for the groups are all mobile, setting the time as late as 5:00 for realism. Also, does anyone feel that John's "Magic Antidote" make him overpowered? He only has 2 small vials left. Omega8o8 17:44, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
I think we should just set the clock back. I believe everything was fine.. well, until after Chapter 20.
Random Man 0213 04:11, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
I feel that the entire concept is a little patchy in some places. We've got people who refuse to let others use their characters, which creates plot holes, the fact that everyone adds their own parts and may contradict a previous chapter and uses of "Overpowered," per say, weapons and people. I'm not critizing this roleplay, I just think that it is not completely thought thru. Rambo362 23:45, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
Per: Samuel Smith Edit
Hey guys, if we revert the entire RP to Chapter 11, I'd really like to keep Sam's letter in there somewhere, it's just introducing him through a letter home, should I move this to his Bio area or reintroduce it as a new entry? Thanks ''Master Kenobi 17:45, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Idea! Maybe as a way to introduce Smith, one of our characters could find the "unmailed letter" and possibly reference it in the chapters. We then find a few more of them and begin to make him flourish BEFORE he makes an appearence?
I like it! since the letter is already set before the actual events, maybe he is the last of the squad alive after a "crash" in a Berlin suburb, and that is where the final letter is found on him, barely alive. Hmm thanks ^_^ ''Master Kenobi
I agree with Chiafriend and I just want to say I'm sorry for most of the stuff I did. I sort of used a lot of the characters that weren't mine without consulting their creators. I didn't know and I just did it because other people did. I will change my ways but for the record where should I tell the creator that I'm using their character. Thanks. Plus, I'll fix up my quotation usage. I've always had a problem with it.
For the future, I don't think that we need to delete most of the stuff. For the chapters with no connection between them, we should just add another chapter between the two explaining what happened. Or maybe we can modify our chapters so that they make more sense. But for the chapters that completely make no sense, they should just be deleted. The characters should stay, but we should just make them more believable and not make them seemingly invincible. For grammer, every week we should have a "grammer patrol" to correct all of the mistakes. The entire idea of this forum is to have fun, but I think that the fun should at least make sense. Then again, this IS a zombie apocalypse...
Plus, if we decide to revert or delete something, then can we at least keep Erika?
By the way, if you want to use my character, Erika, you can, but don't kill or abuse her without my permission.
Random Man 0213 17:48, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
I agree Edit
Yeah, let's start back from Chapter 24, that's when things made sense, and I'll delete my unneccesery characters if you guys want, as I don't really have a use for them.
Braden 0.0 17:55, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
By the way Wilding, your character was with us at the part when they were suggesting to get out of the city, but suddenly, in the next chapter, you are alone and separated from the rest. How did you get outside? Just saying, but you don't need to delete it, maybe post another chapter between the two explaining how you got there.
Yeah, I agree, we should restart from chapter 24 and delete everything after that. No offense to the users who contributed to those chapters, but if they were deleted, everything would make much more sense.
Random Man 0213 17:58, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Im ok with that. I just want to ask that before the mass delete occurs that my chapter be copy-pasted as a new chapter. I dont think my chapter messes up the story, its just a secondary storyline for diversity, which is why I DO NOT want my characters to meet up with the main group. If they do meet up, my group would probably desert sooner or later. Omega8o8 18:14, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Random: I lost trakc completely of where Wilding was because some entries were vague on who was where and how they got there that I said "forget it" and seperated Wilding from the rest. Who wants t ostart Ch. 25? If nobody offers I toss Wilding out and have him meet Ford. Cpl. Wilding 18:24, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
There was a list of people that went down the tunnel at the end of Chapter 21 ( I think ) and Wilding was among that list. It's okay if you decide to seperate your character out of confusion, but at least explain what happened to him and how he got lost. Plus, I agree with you about restarting at Chapter 25; things sort of made sense up until that point.
By the way, I personally don't like chapters 12 and 13, as Der Riese is mentioned on the radio a number of times and Allen seems to know a lot about what happened...
Random Man 0213 19:53, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
By the way guys, the grammar here sucks. I'm going to be correcting it for the next few days. If anybody has a problem with it or disagrees with my corrections, just let me know.
Random Man 0213 22:59, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
NOTE: Please don't get on my case if I replace a word or delete something; I most likely did it to make the sentence sound better and have proper grammer, and I promise you that I will try my best so that it won't affect the story whatsoever. I you disagree with a correction, I'll try to revert it back to its original form. Thank you.
Too many people Edit
I feel there is too many people here. First, there are three soldiers on the Reichstag and four on the house. Then someone come and come and keep coming. Its making me confused and i don't remember anyone. I only remember Wilding, Stanson and Riley. Later in the story (chapter 20-29), new people just introduce and write themselves in (No offense) and join us and look like its the prolouge again. Soon there will be too many people and the roleplay will not become interesting. I think we should restart the roleplay with and the one on the Reichstag should be three or four, the one on the house should be three of four too. Later they unite and one or two (max: 4)will join them too or they find civilians survivors. I don't want every character in this roleplay to be awesome soldiers with big muscles carrying flamethrower and MGs at the same time like in the game. Thank you. Sgt. Resnov Comrades! 09:35, March 22, 2010 (UTC+7)
While on the subject of civilians, I think my story fits in with reznovs plan. I brought in the first civvy, Heinz. I just want to ask an open question, does anyone think my character John Heinz is too overpowered? Omega8o8 02:56, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Well, if more people want to join, then many new characters of course is going to be inevitable. We can't tell people to stop joining, as there are too many people. That isn't very nice... Of course, there are many users with more than one characters, but there isn't anything wrong with that... I personally don't really care about the number of people, just as the story runs smoothly. For instance, Wilding made his character a German who knew very little English, but all of a sudden, he is able to communicate with Vasili with seemingly perfect English. This is what needs to be addressed.
Random Man 0213 04:08, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Not to mention the people with God-modded characters. Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:00, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
Woo I'm glad I asked haha. Well contact me if they are worked out. I'd like to be a part of this RP Wiki. Btw my character isnt a "War Hero". And I thought the setting was after the war in Germany was over? Why would we have MG's and FlameThrowers at the beggining? Unless there was an armory in the Reichstag. I think I remember reading that.
KilleKing17 SoL* 02:52, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
So here's the timeline.
- Eugene drinks coffee in the coffee shop, find a zombie, and went to the Reichstag and find Fletcher. Later they found Brandon.
- Stanson kill zombies, saved by Wilding and found Riley.
- Eugene, Fletcher and Brandon serach the Reichstag, wnet to the armory, and a zombie attcked them.
- Stanson, Wilding and Riley entered a house for protection.
- Vasili in his apartement attacked by zombies and escaped to the house where Stanson, Riley and Wilding was in.
12:00 AM-5:00 PM:Edit
- Vasili joins the group and drink vodka with Stanson.
- Stanson finds an american who later becaome a zombie.
- Allan joins the group.
- Vasili founds a radio. Allen repairs it.
- The group asked Wilding while Vasili makes Berlin's map.
- Eugene, Brandon and Fletcher restock in the armory and barricade the place up.
- Vicks, Fletcher and Brandon rest in the Reichstag
- Allen and Wilding checks the radio again, Riley and Stanson guards the windows and Vasili finished the map.
- They all sleep in both safehouse.
- Cooper kills zombies and founds a light from boarded window (comfirmed: the light on the window is the window that Vasili is working on the map)
7:00 AM-8:00 AMEdit
- The group on the house hears boarding sounds from the Reichstag. (Comfirmed: Boarding sounds Eugene, Brandon and Fletcher building their barricade yesterday night)
- Coopers follows the light yesterday and joins the group on the house.
9:00 AM-15:00 AMEdit
- The group on the house left the house to the streets. Allen recognize a nurse called Erika and joins the group.
- Cole went inside the Reichstag alone and thought the group in front of the Reichstag to be zombies.
- Heinrich Herzog joins the group on streets.
- They reached the Reichstag found Eugene, Fletcher and Brandon and aid them.
- Wilding who got separated heard gun shots from a building.
- The group kill a few zombies and escape from the Reichstag.
- Cole who earlier went inside the Reichstag alone restock in the Reichstag's armory and stalked the group from behind quietly.
- The group met Edgar Buute and private North.
- Hastings meets with Heinz at Prison complex and heads to an old mansion.
1. Heinz and Hastings meet Alexei, Wilding, and Smiles in apartment complex. Omega8o8 08:55, March 24, 2010 (UTC) Still in progress. Feel free to continue. Sgt. Resnov Comrades! 10:21, March 22, 2010 (UTC+7)
Ahh, I see. So there was an armory. So lets say my character was in a house while all this was happening. And he goes outside to see whats happening. When someone spots him. Maybe Cooper from the window? Could we play off of that?
KillerKing17 SoL* 03:20, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Nice Work. All of this seems to be right. Of course, I'm going to have to double check, but if everyone else is okay with it, then I'm okay with it.
Random Man 0213 04:09, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
By the way guys, in the future, before adding new chapters, at least read the chapters before it. This well help solve most of our continuity problems.
Random Man 0213 04:18, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
So...if anyone can answer me. I don't mean to sound desperate but..
KillerKing17 SoL* 06:47, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
It would work, I guess, but I would like an intro for my character, would it work if it was? And after my guy's intro you don't have to ask me if you want to use or harm my character, but don't kill him. Lieutenant J.J 08:09, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
I say that we keep only events up to day 2. After we get everyones requests in mind and keep everything in making sense then we should continue. Until then, I will remove all of my chapters set after day 2, midnight. This means any chapters not occuring simultaneous of the Main group leaving the Reichstag and the Secondary group entering the mansion will need to wait. I hope it is understood why i am asking this of us all. Omega8o8 08:37, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Fine with me. Lieutenant J.J 08:50, March 22, 2010 (UTC)Lieutenant J.J
We can remove Wilding being seperated since now there's at least a timeline I can reference. Also, I think we're cutting it a bit close with Maxis. The mentioning of Der Reise is fine, but Maxis I'm not sure about. Other than that, are we ready to set the clock back? Cpl. Wilding 19:41, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Well I guess we got the timeline down. I still agree with Chia, and just restart at chapter 24 or 25, when Eugene suggests that they make a run for it, but if anyone disagrees, then I'll be okay with it.
Random Man 0213 20:27, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
I like how you guys added Cole's story too
LEt's start from 24 or 25. It makes sense; the others are kind of stupid and makes no sense.
Can I join in or somthing? Let me know if I can or not. Rambo362 22:58, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Of course you can join, but not now. We have some problems that need to be taken care of but after that feel free to contribute!
Random Man 0213 23:00, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
By the way guys, I think we just finished Day Two and are now going to need to go on to Day Three. Whoever wants to complete this timeline is encouraged to do so!
Random Man 0213 20:33, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Usage of another User's character Edit
Hey guys! I was thinking about including a section at the top of the forum where the users would include whether or not they would allow their characters to be used by other users, if not then why, or if there are specific requirements. (We could also add it to our respective character bios!) I believe that this will save a lot of time and space on our talk pages, as we don't have to constantly hunt down the other users just to find out whether or not their characters can be used. Does this sound good. If so, then I'll put it up as soon as I can! This will definently solve our character usage problems!
Name: Erika M. Callahan
Faction: Nurse for the U.S. Military Rank: Medic
Weapon: .357 Magnum Revolver, MP-40
Previous Experience: As a skilled doctor, she used to work at the St. Barnabas hospital in New Jersey before visiting both the Pacific (Okinawa) and Europe (France) in order to care for her country's wounded soldiers. She was recently asked to visit Germany in order to care for the citizens and soldiers of Berlin after the war.
Usage: You can use her if you want, but don't kill or abuse her without my permission!
Read the bold and you'll understand what I'm trying to do. If we included a part like that to every bio, then users will be able to know whether or not they can use those characters. Of course they will need to contact them for more important stuff, like a death, but this will at least set some guidelines and let new users know about the requirements before using said character! If you guys think that this is a good idea, then respond on this talk page and I'll put it up. If you disagree, then tell me and I'll see what I can do!
Random Man 0213 23:09, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
Yes, but what about the whole ask if you want to use kind of people?
Rambo362 19:47, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
I've removed some of the chapters after 24 and added a 23.5. Currently, the large group is still inside the Reichstag, but now without Eugene and Adam, who both left; two guys found a mansion; and a few other guys were just addressed by a German man. Sgt. ChiafriendRifleman 23:44, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
By the way, there's no Chapter 25. Should we delete it or fill it in? Plus, should we correct the grammer in quotes and letters? Maybe it's just the way they talk/ write...
Random Man 0213 00:48, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
By the way guys, I am going to bold some of our bios to make them look more presentable. Anyone who has a problem with it can change it!
Random Man 0213 01:02, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
P.S. I think I have enough time to mention what happens to the group after Eugene and his friend leaves. I really hope that all of the users whose characters are in that group allow me to use them. If you have any objections, please tell me!
Is it ok to join now? I see youv'e taken down the "RolePlay Has Been Paused" section in the Forum. So is high time for me to contribute?
KillerKing17 SoL* 03:36, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Yep, most of the problems have been solved, so it's okay for you to join and contribute now. Have fun and follow the rules!
Random Man 0213 03:45, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
KillerKing17 SoL* 03:49, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
- In the last 3 chapters you've got your tense wrong, it's supposed to be past tense. And, for every one, If this is roleplay why isn't it first person? Lieutenant J.J 05:26, March 23, 2010 (UTC)Lieutenant J.J
- Not all roleplay has to be from first persn, in my experience it flows better as a story if it's in third person. Cpl. Wilding 14:45, March 23, 2010 (UTC)o
From chapter 31-36 this guy have not been signing his post... Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:19, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Not me. I'm still working on my chapter so dont point the finger on me. Just saying
KillerKing17 SoL* 08:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the heads up! Toilet Bowl Soldier 08:11, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
The Unsigned chapters are back! Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:12, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
Delete the unsigned chapters. If people don't want to take credit for their work, then they can see it get tossed into the garbage.
Rambo362 23:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
By the way.. Edit
Anyone notice how Braden0.0 and Sgt.Resnov quote the games ALOT. Mostly from Modern Warfare 2 and WaW. Practically take Nikolia's personality from WaW with Vasili. And Cooper, well he's maybe a little "too" British. Always saying "Bloody" and "Hell". Please dont get mad at me. Just saying using already content makes for a less entertaining Story. Go original.
KillerKing17SoL* 10:06, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Cooper playing too hard to a stereotype may be because I've only actually made one post in character. Hopefully if I get round to another it might straighten out a bit.13:35, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
What about good 'ol Riley? Toilet Bowl Soldier 14:07, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Riley's not so bad. He seems just enough British, not stereotyping it.
KillerKing17 SoL* 14:44, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Ummmm somebody just ended the story .... wait nevermind he ended the story for him .... leaving us in berlin :]Sgt.Cpmaster22 01:10, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
This is annoying me...Edit
People are making their characters unrealistic and stupid and have bad grammar and spelling. Can we do something about this? Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:27, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
Also, I'd like to address a couple problems I see.
- Gold Plated Pistols, Names Straight From The Call Of Duty's, And ANDREI IS NOT GERMAN!! xD He Is Russian, but speaks German. KillerKing17 SoL* 08:06, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
We need an Admin! call Imrlybord7, Callofduty4 or Poketape. Toilet Bowl Soldier 08:45, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Oh lord! An Admin would be like my Jesus right now. Wish I was an Admin v.v KillerKing17 SoL* 08:50, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah... there are many users that are so surreal Toilet Bowl Soldier 08:51, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
and btw, the people here who just joined are pretty much kids who can't get facts right.
Here is the list of stupid weapons they have
- Type 100 WITH SCOPE AND BAYONET!?
- a Browning .30 cal!?
- Scoped Springfield with bayonet AND a Thompson as a backup weapon + a Walther P38.
- a Kar98k, a Colt .45 and a Double Barreled Shotgun
- Stolen PTRS-41!? Stolen Mosin-Nagant!? AND A FREAKING COLT .45!
This is really annoying me, and we NEED an admin to teach these kids some realism facts. Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:00, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Yes, Gold Plated guns, Japanses guns. How did they even get in Germany!? Plus when people who are carrying a Browning 50. Cal, A Trench Gun, and a Revolver I doubt you could sprint away from zombies and dash around headshotting every one. If an Admin is reading this, please help. My weapons: SVT-40, Tokarev TT-30, and a Machete. Now the Machete may sound, ehh, a little unrealistic. But it plays to my backstory. Sorry kids, Super-Roided soldiers with Flamethrowers, Machine guns, Bowie Knifes, grenades, and dual pistols just dont exist. It'd be fuckin' awesome if they DID, but they dont. KillerKing17 SoL* 09:09, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
I just laughed my fkin ass off when i saw this guy's weapon
- Highly Customised Thompson (Grip, Round Drum Custom Red & Black Camo, Apreture Sight)
Kids! this is not Call of Duty World at War Multiplayer Zombie Survival! Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:13, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Lord! maybe we should have created our own website, devoted to the story instead of here. That way maybe less World At War fanatics would join and ruin the story. KillerKing17 SoL* 09:18, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Good idea... but we can just wait for an admin instead. I'll try to contact one. Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:23, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
I thought Doc.Richtofen was an Admin... just saying KillerKing17 SoL* 09:26, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
lol yeh he is one. Toilet Bowl Soldier 09:28, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Lol, Yep, I'm awesome. KillerKing17 SoL* 09:33, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
What? My loadout (Scoped Springfield with bayonet, a Thompson as a backup weapon + a Walther P38) doesn't sound realistic to you guys? My weapons sound WAY more realistic than, say, a guy lugging around a f*%$ing stolen PTRS 41. I've written only one entry. Maybe my character finds a Thompson later on. Maybe he's forced to throw one away. Maybe he doesn't carry all of them at the same time. I'm just saying that give the people with weapons that you can normally carry a break and that we're all trying to have fun, too.
Rambo362 19:09, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Well you could have put the Thompson in your character's weapon loadout when he finds it later. But the Stolen-PTRS is just pure bullshit. Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:03, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Exactly. My character was never said to be carring his Thompson in his first appearence and bayonets can be taken off for storage. BTW people can carry .30s and there's a varient just for that.
Rambo362 10:55, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, the M1919A6 model, but its like so much heavier than the A4 model and i don't like the fact that people can carry Browning .30cals around getting headshots and reloading like some Hollywood action guy. Toilet Bowl Soldier 13:14, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah that's retarded. I hate that, but if their just carring it around with someone else to reload and shit of that nature then I'd be ok with it. Rambo362 14:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Movies and Video Games are spoiling realism Toilet Bowl Soldier 16:17, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
okay i have a 30. cal with me but i have a backup soldier to reload it. besides it needs to be setup to be used, that's why i've only used my pistol so far. (and i WILL switch it out cause i dont have infinite amounts of ammo like other people)Sgt.Cpmaster22 17:21, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Since it seems to be making everyone mad, I've deleted my PTRS-41 and changed the Gold plated pistol to nickel plated. Happy now? I've also changed my character's name. AGAIN. --XaduratingSushi
Can your character be like OSS, MI6 or do they have to be in the military and not intelligence? Squelliot
Not sure, have to ask the gamemaster. Toilet Bowl Soldier 04:13, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
I also notice some people participating in the forum not doing anything. Not even posting chapters. Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, I've noticed that, too. Would it be wrong to ask them to leave the roleplay?
Rambo362 22:20, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
Yes, tell the admin... or the gamemaster... btw the god-modding characters are back! Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:27, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
Realism, one of the participants said that their character killed the Fuhrer, whick ticked me off because i like it to be realistic and follow history, any one else agree? Squelliot
Rambo362 23:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
I see a few users that annoy the crap out of me and need to be kicked out from this roleplay! Toilet Bowl Soldier 08:57, April 6, 2010 (UTC)
Can I join this story Edit
Because you can't just ruin a movie by changing the title or kill the main character. So can I join? BBuzz 03:16, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
I just have one question.last time Stanton and allen were in the Roleplay, they were with Micheals. Where's Micheals now?
Rambo362 19:36, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Nevermind, I filled in the gap.
Rambo362 21:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
Don't ask me, ask those new users with roid pumped characters! Toilet Bowl Soldier 04:04, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
I, too, have a question. why is it that whenever there's another part written in continuation from one that I wrote my character is never there? People, You can use my character!
Rambo362 17:11, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
In case you were wondering, I'm still using Vasili; he's currently trying to escape the Reichstag. I hope that's okay...
Random Man 0213 23:00, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
Just to let anybody know:Edit
There is a love triangle that is going to happen (or already is happening) in the Roleplay Forum Toilet Bowl Soldier 18:09, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
Im Really Confused at chapter 100/101 I mean, WHERE IS EVERYONE!!! There is atleast 3 groups, Vasili Micheal And Cooper, Johaan Eddy and Josh, Then A couple of other people and the rest. can someone please tell me whats going on. Squelliot
Ask the idiots who ruined the story. Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
That's gonna have to be a little more specific, that's why people have to sign their post. Squelliot
Actually with Johaan, Eddy and Josh are Daniel and Venator. who are in a house being horded right nowSgt.Cpmaster22 00:27, April 6, 2010 (UTC)
Where has Smiles gone? He was with Hastings and the three Germans, but suddenly all the characters are split up randomly. Can we call are characters by their nicknames or surnames? It's getting confusing. Lieutenant J.J 07:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)Lieutenant J.J
Can We Put the story on hold until we figure out what's going on? Squelliot
We need to do that. Lieutenant J.J 22:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)Lieutenant J.J
Not to mention God-Modded characters, oh and we need to kick out some users who are obviously not signing their post and not having good grammar. Toilet Bowl Soldier 02:41, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
At chapter 101, why did he suddenly go Rambo? Toilet Bowl Soldier 14:00, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Sgt.Chiafriend has gave me the permission to halt this roleplay because its REALLY getting out of control (God-modded characters, users not even posting chapters, and people not signing their posts). if any one else agrees about the halt, just write down your opinions below. Toilet Bowl Soldier 02:47, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah I agree, just bar the users who don't sign their posts from the roleplay, I've edited the page saying the Role play has been paused (Again).
Braden 0.0 12:23, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
And don't forget God-modded characters. This roleplay is already getting out of control. Braden, please help me spot some users who don't even post chapters and have stupid characters please? thanks. Toilet Bowl Soldier 12:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
And let me quote Chiafriend about God-modding for those who don't know what it is.
- God-modding: Everyone wanting their character to be really cool and special also makes the story corny. Scoring one-hundred confirmed kills is the limit of it, but being able to carry an MG42 around and have any thought of being able to fire accurately without a tripod or bipod or carrying an FG42, a pistol, and a flamethrower with associated tank would bog anyone down so much they would have no combat effectiveness.
got it? Toilet Bowl Soldier 12:34, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
^Yup, and to solve the unsigned post thing, we should make a rule saying:
Please don't forget to sign your posts, failure to comply with this rule WILL result in being ejected from the roleplay.
Braden 0.0 12:56, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, we should put up that rule. Im seeing A LOT of unsigned chapters (around more than 5). But first, we need to see which users need to be kicked out for inactivity, God-modding their characters, and not Signing their posts. Toilet Bowl Soldier 13:07, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
Sgt.Cpmaster22's character, Daniel "Sarge" Frayer is a prime example of a God-Modded Character,
Weapon: Browning 30 Cal, Colt .45 (Ok so a little unrealistic lugging around a 31 pound LMG. Then i almost panicked when I read this, and I quote
"Previous Experience: Landed on Omaha beach and lost all of his company and took out the remaining German's in the trench with a standard issue ration. Fought in Dragon's Teeth and took down a MG Nest with his helmet. Currently deployed In Berlin." Seriously WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Agreed? Sgt.Cpmaster22 if you read this change your character God Modness down to a "Normal" level. Squelliot
Oh and remove some people who don't even post chapters. Toilet Bowl Soldier 18:43, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
I have a question, too. Why is almost everyone's character bio include somthing about loosing their entire squad/unit, ect.? Real soldiers who have seen that can be mentally unstable or traumatized even to this day. I know it sounds cool and all, but it really causes so many traumatizing conditions that it leaves soldiers unable to think rationally and logicaly. There are few soldiers who can survive that feeling but not many. Keep this in mind when creating a new character.
Major Rambo362 18:56, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
My good 'ol Riley lost half of his Company... not the entire Squad or whatever. and I did not say anything about Riley taking 2 Panzerschrecks and firing it with both hands and killing a Nazi with a toy doll. Toilet Bowl Soldier 18:58, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
I believe that is reasonable but the whole taking out machingun nests worth of Germans with a non-lethal object is a load of bullshit.
Major Rambo362 19:07, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
Some of this is so ridiculous that it's Ramirez! Worthy Squelliot
Ok i changed my "godlyness" down to normal. I'm keeping my 30.cal though. Frayer isn't even running fast with it. If you want I'll make someone have to help him lug it around.Sgt.Cpmaster22 01:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
I've been doing some analyzing and these are the users that should be removed from the roleplay for various reasons.
- Belinski,Nikolai (DEFINETLY)
- ToShootToKill (maybe
if anyone objects please just tell me and please don't troll -.- Toilet Bowl Soldier 13:11, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
^^ Frayer shouldn't even BE able to run with a .30 Cal Browning, it's too heavy -.- Braden 0.0 14:37, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
Something I want to know: when did we start taking elements from Left 4 Dead? Tank zombies? Seriously? That's worse than the last time we did this where Dr. Maxis and Der Reise were mentioned.Perhaps instead of having it on this forum, we should put the RP on an external site so that is somebody isn't active, then it won't clutter up a page. Just my two cents. Cpl. Wilding 18:30, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, im deleting some of the users in the list! no objection. Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
I've removed some in-active users and some that don't play by the rules. Just to let anybody know... Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:22, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
Actually Braden, he can! I was reading the article for the browning and some soldiers during the war ran with the browning with a sling. So i'm adding a sling to the browningSgt.Cpmaster22 21:50, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
I think we should kick LT J.J. because of his unrealistic arsenal. A browning (pretty realistic) but with a BIPOD?!?!?!? The bipod weighs over 50 pounds (as i read in the article about the browning, or maybe it was 30 pounds) whichever it is it weighs at least 60 pounds! He has to have someone helping him to carry it!Sgt.Cpmaster22 21:55, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
I hope my Erika isn't causing any trouble...
Random Man 0213 21:59, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
P.S. Did you guys at least give them warnings?
By the way, can we unpause the Roleplay? I'm dying to get started again.. Braden 0.0 00:04, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
The names of the people who were removed are still in the character list.
Major Rambo362 01:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
@Rambo362 I removed some of them because they were not even active on this forum.
@Braden 0.0 The Roleplay will resume until we solve one more problem. If you read Chapter 101, XaduratingSushi suddenly made Falcon go into Godmode and seperate from the group thinking he can no scope every zombie in the place with his "Stolen PTRS-41"
@Random Man 0213 Nah, not at all.
@Sgt. Cpmaster22 I'll look into it. :) Toilet Bowl Soldier 02:48, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
@Toilet Bowl Soldier I was talking about the Bio area, not the participants.
Major Rambo362 11:02, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
Since everyone seems to hate me, I'll just delete myself from the roleplay. Oh and by the way, I DON'T HAVE THE PTRS-41 ANYMORE.
Remove them for me plz... im kinda busy XD Toilet Bowl Soldier 11:53, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
First of all, I totally have nothing against you, second of all, I was being sarcastic about the PTRS-41. And lastly, you don't have to remove yourself from the roleplay. I just wanna know why Falcon suddenly went "Chuck Norris" in Chapter 101. And btw use four tildes to sign your post. Toilet Bowl Soldier 18:23, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
I was kinda wondering the same thing. I mean, it would have been ok if you wanted him to snap from the stress and kill him off in that way, but other than that he was better off with the group.
Major Rambo362 19:41, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
We can't continue with this roleplay until we discuss these damned "Tank zombies" and how the hell they appeared in the first place. Cpl. Wilding 02:41, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
Ask the idiot who created them! just remove them for our sake Toilet Bowl Soldier 08:26, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, if you guys have any other issues, please let me know. We'll discuss them and THEN resume the roleplay. Toilet Bowl Soldier 19:38, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
Omega808 created the "Tank" Zombie in chapter 60-70, and he also christened them "Tanks" however, I for one DON'T want to roll back the role play story again, I'm editing some stories and deleting the Tank Zombies, and then we can resume the role play. Braden 0.0 03:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
Ok then what about the unsigned chapters? Toilet Bowl Soldier 03:37, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
We'll all just sign the posts, I mean, the people who unsigned their chapters are gone, so, what are they gonna do about it? Braden 0.0 13:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, then lets resume the roleplay since all the problems are solved and btw, Riley loses his Bren in either an awkward or epic way... or both. Toilet Bowl Soldier 13:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry guys, I was a little up tight. I was wondering if you guys think I should rejoin the roleplay?
XaduratingSushi 05:27, April 19, 2010 (UTC)XaduratingSushi
Sure thing sushi! just don't fuck up the story or whatever. Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:01, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
Yay! I'll rejoin in about 14 hours. And I'll try not to, as I'm not planning any more Tank zombies, PTRS-41s or other bullcrap like that.
XaduratingSushi 07:34, April 19, 2010 (UTC)XaduratingSushi
Welcome back soldier :) Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:40, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
Alright, so my computer recently broke, so I couldn't participate in the RP. I have no clue if I'm still in the Wiki. I understand if I'm not. But if I am I'd appreciate it if someone informed me of my character. Oh yea, hes not German, but he speaks it. His names Cole Prichter. Last time I had him he was in a house with Wilding and another injured soldier with a vile of something or another, I don't really remember. Thanks. KillerKing17SoL* 05:42, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
OK, now that my coursework is done I might be able to start contributing properly again. Emphasis on the "might".09:22, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
Hey Killer, you're still in the Roleplay relax! Toilet Bowl Soldier 06:11, April 21, 2010 (UTC)
It's not that, its that I have no clue where in the holy hell my character is. O.O KillerKing17 SoL* 02:18, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
Just browse through the forum for your character... relax! Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:17, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
Dude, I'm calm xD KillerKing17 SoL* 00:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
I'm not going to roleplay for a while, mostly due to schoolwork, but I request that you guys not delete my character Erika or my name from the list. I will occasionally come by and do some grammar or maybe write another chapter. Please, don't delete anything unless I am contacted first.
Random Man 0213 00:29, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
No problem. Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:42, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
Alot of chapters have very little content, so I was wondering if there are a couple of stub chapters in a row should we compile them into one chapter and credit the users?
Yeah, just replace them. Toilet Bowl Soldier 07:38, April 26, 2010 (UTC) == Is it just me?==
Or is this Roleplay Forum dead. Toilet Bowl Soldier 18:08, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, since the temporary closing, there have been less than 3 posts a week. Maybe we should close it for good, but not before writing an ending that includes everybody (I.E. the Allies nuke or carpet bomb the city to the ground.) Rambo362 21:50, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Nah... I think its because its the exam period or people are extremely busy. Toilet Bowl Soldier 02:50, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Wait I think people still think the Roleplay forum is on halt. Please try and inform everyone that its not anymore. Toilet Bowl Soldier 04:37, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
I think that maybe we shouldn't just yet. It might draw away attention from the Overhaul Project. I think that blogs are being closed down for a little while because it is thought to be a distraction from the mainspace editing. Rambo362 19:19, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, so first question. 1:Is this forum dead? 2:If not, I have no clue where my character is. My bloody internet was disconnected and I honestly forgot about this Forum xD and 3: The last time I had a clue to where anybody was it was when Wilding was still posting. :P KillerKing17 12:00, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
Is the forum dead? Kind of, We need to get the people who are participating in this forum back together, So please try and get them back together KillerKing. Oh, and on the 18th of June, im going to Gold Coast Australia for a holiday so I won't be so active around the 18th to the 25th of June. --Soldier 12:05, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
So its one of those deals where me and you are the last people who remember this? KillerKing17 12:08, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
Hey guys! We have advanced pretty far into the story, so I believe that now would be an appropriate time to discuss the cause of this zombie outbreak? Should we derive the story from World at War, create our own background, or leave the cause of the zombies unknown?
Random Man 0213 03:29, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
Hmm... how bout some elements from CoD Black Ops? GKNOVA6? Der Riese? Oh and not to forget the Love Triangle between Erika, Riley and Allan >.< --Soldier 04:20, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
I was thinking about using the story of Nazi Zombies. Plus, I was thinking about adding the fact that the US gov't found out about the project and, seeing a big opportunity for a new ultimate weapon (ultimate soldier?), employed a sinister general and a group of scientists to test it in Berlin; if something went wrong, then no American citizens would be harmed. A mishap caused a zombie outbreak in Berlin, and now the military sends planes to bomb and destroy them to protect everyone as well as to keep the secret away from other countries. Does this sound good? It's just an idea. I'm sure there are better ones out there...
Random Man 0213 21:03, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
As long as they don't die or anything... :) --Soldier 05:12, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Moving To The Fanfic WikiEdit
I was thinking that maybe we should move this to the FanFic Wiki because this technically is a FanFic. I talked to CodExpert and he said it would be fine. Tell me what you think. Rambo362
I thought this Fanfic was dead? Lol... --Soldier 16:39, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
Hmm... That would be a bit difficult... because of the amount of times others ruined the story, i'll try and summarise on what've happened. --Soldier 03:54, November 1, 2010 (UTC)
Getting Members back togetherEdit
Okay, since I've left, the role play I've noticed has became "dead", so to speak, I've tried reviving it, and it's successful, but Chia and TBS requested me to wait until they help finish off the roleplay, so, those who participated in this RP, please help me with this! Braden 0.0 Talk 19:50, November 12, 2010 (UTC)